Hi! I am a student at Havelock North Intermediate School. I am in Room 16 and my teacher is Miss Robertson.
Wednesday, 13 April 2016
〰〰Marley〰〰
Pet/Kitten/Marley
Morning
School
Athletics
Cutest
Clumsy
This term we have been working on recounts/feelings we have used roald dahl to help us along the way. This is my recount!
“Can you please go get the mail bud?”my mum asked. I sprinted outside, I heard a slight noise, at first I thought it was a bird, but it wasn't! I saw a clumsy small black figure in the distance in the bushes. ‘Meow’ he slowly walks out of the bushes. I call my mum and my sister. Mum comes out first, second my sister. I pick him up in my arms and cuddle him. We walked inside with him we put him down he ran as fast as he could right into the window.
Mum Said We’ve got to get to school, I said Okay. Meanwhile my sister stayed at home cuddling and feeding our new kitten Marley. After lots of learning and a long day, I sprinted home. I walked up the driveway and see Marley and my sister sitting at the window waiting for me to get home. I opened the door and walked inside. I instantly dropped my bag without getting my lunchbox out or anything, I walk up to Marley and give him a big hug. He was still a bit scared. But after awhile he settled down…
Marley had blue eyes as blue as the afternoon sky. Fur as black as the night sky. Sprinting across the room like a jaguar, hoping to get to the other side as soon as possible.Our other cats Rossy And Meka acting suspicious wanting to jump and attack Marley as he walks past. I told my mum “we are going to have to get to know Marley a lot more!”
→Hook The Reader In.
→Include the important information for the reader.
→Include details so that reader knows how we feel.
Monday, 4 April 2016
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